101r ruby glass Original: La premiere experience que jen ay faicte il nest venu quune masse jaulne
Current TL: The first experience that I made thus, it only returned a yellow mass
Suggestion: The first experience that I made of it, it only returned a yellow mass
(Reason: "of it" is a more literal translation of "en", and I think makes more sense here – it's not entirely clear what the "thus" is referring to)
@ps2270 ok?
157r rouge clair
Original: Aulcuns orfevres lesprouvent sur de lor esp battu tanvre & bien bruny avecq le chaple
Current TL: Some goldsmiths assay it on thinly beaten gold & that is well burnished with a chaple.
Suggestion: Some goldsmiths assay it on gold, thinly beaten & well burnished with a chaple. (Avoids the silently added "that is", which besides does not read well)
Good. Go ahead and charge
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157r rouge clair
Original: Aulcuns orfevres lesprouvent sur de lor esp battu tanvre & bien bruny avecq le chaple
Current TL: Some goldsmiths assay it on thinly beaten gold & that is well burnished with a chaple.
Suggestion: Some goldsmiths assay it on gold, thinly beaten & well burnished with a chaple. (Avoids the silently added "that is", which besides does not read well)
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